Lady-Like Patty O'Green 2

This is the second stab at the assignment my friend gave me for April. The first time I drew her hair incorrectly, and this was my fix. Unfortunately I only had about 30 minutes to fix her when the first stab took a good several hours, so as a result it's not as good as I'd like it to be. I still don't think it looks bad though. You can see the original by following the [link]

The site this is for: http:www.rainbowbrite.co.uk